Tuesday, May 13, 2008

4th Year Film pitch package

So I have been reeeeeeeally busy getting settled over here in East Aurora, NY... adjusting to being a temporary American is interesting! More on that soonly :)

In the meantime, here is my 4th Year film pitch package that I handed in on the last day of 3rd year. I love my initial concept, but this summer it will need to go through a lot of growing pains and changes.

But here's the starting point. Critiques and comments are always encouraged and appreciated!


Daphne said...

It's solid Stacey!

Yes, go for a smaller hat for the main character. The juxtaposition would be good. I love the secondary character.

And Seuss style is always awesome in my book. My children adore everything Seuss.

Cool environment. what about making the colours slightly more similar to add to the sameness of everything? Of course how to do that and yet keep it colourful?

Then again I would assume your protagonist and secondary character might work best if they were just that much brighter than the rest of the village...keep the sky bright and the grass green but the buildings maybe less so...

All just suggestions and not in anyway things that I see as better...

Stacey Chomiak said...

Daphers, thx so much for the comment! Great idears... I shall keep it all in mind when I work on it more this summer.

I always appreciate the help!!

julie said...

I LOVE FLUFFPOT!!! Great ideas Stacerama!!! LOVE YOU!!!